Close to the Edge

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“Close to the Edge” is a short story told by Cecile Kruger. This story is about a tenager named Obely and her mum. They were walking toward a green smoke in the distance. It was a city or a village and as soon as they started talking they would get a mouthful of sand. And the wind would blow Right into their eyes to make them red and make them sting. She was walking with her hand on the rock so she didn't go too close to the edge and then her hand. went into a hole in the rock she and it was big Enough that she could fit in it she looked in the hole and then. She Sled down into it and she Landed something cold like water.